Swimming Sports

This week we have been writing about swimming sports because we had them last week.
I found it tricky to find the right adjectives because I didn't know what ones I should in the writing.
I enjoyed publishing it onto my chromebook because I could do it very quick.
Next time I would change my adjectives.


WALHT: use THE BEST adjectives.
Success Criteria  🌝 🌝 🌝
I can find examples of the senses
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I can find ‘simple’ adjectives.
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I can find interesting adjectives
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Swimming Sports

Nervously I wait in line for my heat. I look at everyone in my race and feel frightened. I hop up onto the block as I wait for the whistle.

First race 25 meter freestyle. I can smell the strong chlorine as I look around at all the people sitting on the stands watching. Beep! I hear the whistle and I dive like a rocket and I feel the warm water. I’m tired and I start gasping for breath.

I start my butterfly race, I dive in and start swimming but I see people in front of me and so I start swimming even harder and I think to myself I can do this and in the end I finish 3rd. I am very happy with my placement because I’m not that great at butterfly.

This is the most tiring race of all the 50 meter freestyle. I hear people cheering so I was even more enthusiastic to try and win. Splash. I open my eyes in the crystal clear water, I swim like a bullet. I do a tumble turn and now I’m even more tired. I come 4th or 5th place and I am very tired.

Beep. I dive in for my final race the 25 meter breaststroke. I think I could come at least 3rd because I’m quite good at breaststroke. I see a white trail of bubbles in front of me so I bullet off and come 3rd so I’m very happy with my placing.