Wednesday, 13 May 2020

Detective Writing


Scenario 1
Scenario 2
Scenario 3
Someone has eaten Hulks sandwich at Avengers Tower HQ.


Clues
Spider Webs
Fortnite on the PlayStation
Iron Man's sunglasses
Ant man’s wallet

Suspects
Ant-Man
Thor
Iron Man
Spider-Man



Success Criteria
Self Assessment
Use adjectives
😁😁
Use words and phrases that grab the reader’s attention and interest.
😁😁😁


Start writing below:
Suddenly I get a call from the avengers that someone has eaten the hulks yummy  lunch and they need me to come and find out who ate the lunch. I sped down the road as fast as I could and I found the Hulk sitting waiting impatiently for me. I asked him if there were any clues and he said yes, spider webs, fortnite on playstation. Ironmanman's sunglasses and ant man's wallet. Who are the suspects and he said Spiderman, Thor,Ironman and Ant Man. The first thing I realise is that there was no evidence that Thor was there so that means it's not Thor.

If there were spider man's webs then he couldn’t have been at the tv and I don't think that Iron man or Ant man would be playing fortnite so Spider man must have been. If there was Ant man's wallet then he must have gone out and if there was Iron man's sunglasses then he must have been out as well so that means that it was spider man. So then Hulk confronted Spider man and it was him that stole Hulks lunch so he picked up Spiderman and smashed him through a table and then he forced Spiderman to get him a new lunch or he would smash him through a table again.

1 comment:

  1. Dear Billy,
    I think you must know the characters in Avengers quite well. Poor Hulk I can just imagine how impatiently he was waiting. Well done on selecting your own Success Criteria for this task, you have shown you can add detail to grab the readers attention. I love the Avengers movies!
    Ma te wa
    Mrs Aperahama

    ReplyDelete

Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments:
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let me know that you have read, watched or listened to my blog
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question

Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.