This week we were learning how to write a persuasive speech
I enjoyed researching about them because I found out new stuff.
I found it tricky to present my speech because I got nervous .
Title: Bayern Munich football team is the best in the world. |
Introduction What football team is the best in the world? I think that Bayern Munich is the best team in the world because of the champions league titles, all their trophies and all of their fans worldwide. |
Argument 1 Firstly, there is the champions league where all of the best teams in the world go against each other. They won the champions league this year and now tied 3rd of most wins in the champions league titles in the world. They won all of their 14 games in the champions league and scored 42 goals and closest to them had only in the whole of the tournament 25 goals and only 2 of Bayern Munich players had 24 goals. |
Argument 2 Secondly, Bayern Munich have won 70 trophies all together and have 12th most trophies in the world. They won 8 league titles in a row from 2013. They have won the most trophies in their league ever. |
Argument 3 Lastly, there are fans. They have 291,000 official members. With 4,433 fan clubs with over 390,000 members. They have the 5th biggest fan base in the world and have an average 1.5 million shirt sales a year. The amount of fans they have in a game is 75,000 and the value of their club is $2.3 billion. |
Conclusion Therefore, I think that Bayern Munich is the best in the world for all of these reasons and because they have won the champions league this year with all the best teams. |
Success Criteria: | Self Assessment๐๐๐๐ |
I have used my first technique to enhance my writing | ๐๐๐๐ |
I have used my second technique to enhance my writing | ๐๐๐ |
I have used my third technique to enhance my writing | ๐๐๐ |
Use at least three different (FEARRR) persuasive techniques in your writing. | ๐๐๐๐ |
Active Reflection: | My Reflection |
What have I done well? | I did my fear good and also did my self assessment well |
Next step: | I need to add in a little more information. |
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