This week we were learning about the sacraments of initiation.
I enjoyed making the wevideo because it looks good.
I found it tricky to present my rap.
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This week we were learning about the sacraments of initiation.
I enjoyed making the wevideo because it looks good.
I found it tricky to present my rap.
This week we were learning how to write a persuasive speech
I enjoyed researching about them because I found out new stuff.
I found it tricky to present my speech because I got nervous .
Title: Bayern Munich football team is the best in the world. |
Introduction What football team is the best in the world? I think that Bayern Munich is the best team in the world because of the champions league titles, all their trophies and all of their fans worldwide. |
Argument 1 Firstly, there is the champions league where all of the best teams in the world go against each other. They won the champions league this year and now tied 3rd of most wins in the champions league titles in the world. They won all of their 14 games in the champions league and scored 42 goals and closest to them had only in the whole of the tournament 25 goals and only 2 of Bayern Munich players had 24 goals. |
Argument 2 Secondly, Bayern Munich have won 70 trophies all together and have 12th most trophies in the world. They won 8 league titles in a row from 2013. They have won the most trophies in their league ever. |
Argument 3 Lastly, there are fans. They have 291,000 official members. With 4,433 fan clubs with over 390,000 members. They have the 5th biggest fan base in the world and have an average 1.5 million shirt sales a year. The amount of fans they have in a game is 75,000 and the value of their club is $2.3 billion. |
Conclusion Therefore, I think that Bayern Munich is the best in the world for all of these reasons and because they have won the champions league this year with all the best teams. |
Success Criteria: | Self Assessment๐๐๐๐ |
I have used my first technique to enhance my writing | ๐๐๐๐ |
I have used my second technique to enhance my writing | ๐๐๐ |
I have used my third technique to enhance my writing | ๐๐๐ |
Use at least three different (FEARRR) persuasive techniques in your writing. | ๐๐๐๐ |
Active Reflection: | My Reflection |
What have I done well? | I did my fear good and also did my self assessment well |
Next step: | I need to add in a little more information. |
This week we were learning how to collage.
I enjoyed making my dog because I like how mine turned out.
I found it tricky to do my collage because it took ages.
This week we were learning about different animals.
I enjoyed learning about white rhinoceros.
I found it tricky to get stuff for the habitat/location.
WALHT: write a personal comment or reflection to end our writing | Self Assessment ๐๐๐๐ |
I will explain the dynamics using powerful verbs and adjectives. | ๐๐๐ |
I will let the audience know what I learnt. | ๐๐๐ |
I will finish my report with a personal comment or reflection. | ๐๐๐๐ |
White Rhinoceroses
White Rhinos are the second largest land mammal after the elephant. Rhino is not the scientific name it is Rhinoceroses and comes from Afrikaans. There are only 5 species of Rhinos 2 in Africa and 3 in Asia and their group name is called crash.
White and black rhinos are actually grey even though they are called black and white rhinos. An adult white rhino is the same height as a Asian elephant at 2.5 m-4m and weigh 500 kg-2500kg. Rhinos horn grow 3 inches a year and most ever was 5 feet. The horn is not actually connected to their skull and they have squared lips.
White rhinos live in northern and southern Africa and both northern white rhinos are female.
Since rhinos have square lips they can pluck leaves and fruit off trees. Female white rhinos use their horn to protect and males use it to fight. Rhinos actually have a very good hearing and smell. Some rhinos can reach upto the speed of 40km per hour. I have learnt alot about white rhinos and I think people should stop killing the rhinos so they can live like they used to.
Written by Billy
This week we were learning about different creatures.
I enjoyed learning new facts that I didn't know about rhinos.
I found it tricky to get a good photo for the rhino.
We were playing rugby league and we learnt new skills and the rugby teachers we really cool. They were from Turanga Health and we learnt things like side stepping and passing. At the end we played a game and it was a game of touch.
They come in and play rugby with us so we can stay healthy and be strong they come every Tuesday. I like it because I can stay fit and try new things and I think I got better at passing a rugby ball.