Cuz ending

This week we were learning how to make a story ending.

I enjoyed making the ending because it's exciting.

I found it tricky to get the right size for the words.

WALHT: use THE BEST adjectives.

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I have used my senses to choose the most appropriate adjective.

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I have identified the ‘simple’ adjectives.

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I have made a quick brainstorm of other interesting words for the ‘simple’ words.

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I have used a thesaurus and classroom displays to help me come up with other interesting adjectives. 

I have made a change.

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I have made a change.

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“Huia are you ok”
Huia didn’t answer. River whispered to Huia “it's already been 56 days in the Milford Sound and we haven’t seen anyone. But suddenly there was movement in the bushes when someone came out and shouted “it's bitter out here!” Yeah we were numbing” whispered River and Huia.
“Can you see that it looks like smoke” screeched Huia.

They went to the top of the hill and they saw a windy road. “ Finally shouted River. “A fire whispered the lost guy. We followed the road but we had to stop because our feet were aching from all the walking we did.” I can hear them talking” Said Huia. Vroom raced a car “ there has to be a city around here somewhere” shouted River. “ Hello!'' the town shouted “greetings” shouted the random guy. “ Wait I notice you guys from somewhere “ Oh you were on the news” everyone these are the people off the news declared the person in the town. “Finally” screamed River and we found someone. Everyone was so relieved that we found someone and a town. “You guys must be starving in that forest” said the people in the town as they all surrounded them. “We need to find our home,'' whispered Huia to River. “We will tell them tomorrow,'' whispered River.