Teeth

This week we were learning how to use powerful language.

I enjoyed writing the story because it is quite descriptive

 I found it tricky to use proper specific nouns.

One beautiful morning two friends went out for a fish. They could feel the long brown rods and the freezing water. The boat was rocky and the surroundings were marvelous. Shiny water with a steep mountain side with bushy trees. They were having a nice chat while his friend winded in his fishing rod. You could hear the sharp wind and all the birds chirping flying high. You could also hear the fishing rod winding in