This week we were writing about what we did in lockdown.
I enjoyed writing because it was really fun to write about.
I found it tricky to start sentences with a verb or adverb.
WALHT: Use powerful verbs and adverbs
Self Assessment
powerful verbs
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appropriate adverbs
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begin some sentences with a verb or adverb.
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Looking through the window at my 2020 lockdown
“Wake up.” Whispered Mum it was already 11:00. 4 whole weeks in lockdown in my house because of coronavirus. I have to stay in my house with my Dad, my Mum and my brother. I just wanted to sleep in as much as I could. I was so sleepy and I slowly slumped my way down the hallway. I searched for some breakfast but Mum says “I'm going to cook some pancakes.”
I think, what am I going to do while I wait? I know I will play fortnite. I smile as I see the victory royale banner. Finally after 4 games my brother wakes up and says “I get the first pancake!” But I want it so I have a boxing fight with him and I actually won even though he’s 3 years older than me.
It's already 1:00 and I'm really bored so I practise football because I can’t play so it’s the closest thing to it. First I practise keepy uppies then I learn how to do an around the world, then I do some passes and some shooting. I finally came and I had a nap.
Kia ora Billy, you have written a fabulous descriptive sentence, 'I slowly slumped my way down the hallway'. Great use of vocabulary. Can you work on adding more detail to your story and JUST write about the important/interesting bits. Dig a bit deeper and start writing about how the world around you might be functioning as well. Ka pai, Miss Hickling.
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