Today we were learning how to write a acrostic poem.
I enjoyed writing it.
I found it tricky to put in the adverbs.
Anzac day
NZEF (New Zealand Expeditionary Force)
Zeppelin (german airships)
Anzac biscuits
Constantly guns fired
Defenceless men
Achy
Yelled at by other people.
Good afternoon Billy, you have tried really hard at finding some descriptive language for your poem. I really like the line 'constantly guns fired' and 'yelled at by others'. Ka pai, Miss Hickling.
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