I found it easy to write the prayer.
I found it tricky to think what to write.
Dear God
We remember those who have come back from war.
They fought for freedom through the darkest nights and longest days many lost their lives.
At dawn we should remember them.
They didn’t choose to go to war but they didn’t say no they carried on.
Amen
ki ora billy i can see you showed lots of compassion throughout this poem.
ReplyDeletemaybe you could of made it a bit longer?
how long did it take you to write this poem?
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Tyler
Hi Tyler it took me about 15 minutes to write this poem and next time I will make it bigger
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Billy
Hi Billy, what a thoughtful prayer you have written. It was really touching reading the words you wrote. We will always remember them. Ka pai, Miss Hickling.
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