Friday, 17 April 2020

Isolation Easter

This week was Easter and we had to stay in isolation.
I found it easy to write the story.
I found it tricky to put in the adverbs.
WALHT add detail

Success Criteria
Self Assessment
Use adjectives to describe


Use powerful verbs


Use adverbs (ly words)


Isolation Easter
I awoke on Easter Sunday. I was excited for all the eggs but then I remembered that the whole of New Zealand was in lockdown. Once everyone got up out of bed my brother and I quickly  opened the presents, our Grandma in New Zealand got us Ferrero Rocher eggs and squirrels and my Grandma in England got us a giant chocolate football filled with premier league stickers. After we finished with the presents my dad started to cook some crispy bacon it was extremely delicious.

We used Zoom to talk to our Grandparents in New Zealand because we are not able to go around and see them. After we finished with the call we went outside to tidy our garden because it was like a building site. We had to dismantle our trampoline and move it to the front garden. It was awfully heavy but we got there in the end. Along with that we went for an hour walk around the neighbourhood.

For dinner we had a marvellous roast lamb with roast vegetables and while we were eating we watched Spider-Man Homecoming. After our dinner we facetimed our Grandma in England to wish her a Happy Easter. Grandma was also spending Easter in lockdown.

So Easter in lockdown wasn’t that bad.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Billy, you have used some powerful words to add detail to your writing, well done. How big was your easter egg with the stickers inside? Next time copy and paste your success criteria in the grid by hitting ctrl + v (instead of ctrl + shift + v). Ka pai, Miss Hickling.

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